OC trying Lam Art Style

Did i do a good job?

I feel like my previous art using Lam art style was so shit so I had to redo it for my PP for twitch account :)
https://www.twitch.tv/mitsuhide_akechi_xiv

Want similar art style on your character? Comms open :D
https://www.fiverr.com/queenapollyonyt?up_rollout=true